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Noodle
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PostSubject: ~Life or Death~   ~Life or Death~ EmptySat Apr 24, 2010 9:21 pm


Life or Death
By: Millie

Chapter One – Castle Guardians
I went to the underworld to search for my brother, because I remember that Princess Cecily told me that he was in her castle. Genevieve came along with me.
“Hold! You can not pass through.” One of the guards said to us.
“Genevieve Lafeyet.” Genevieve told them and showed them her pendant.
They let her pass, but didn’t let me pass.
“I can not force them to let you in too, it’s not in my authority.” She said to me.
I sighed.
“We’ll do this the hard way then!” I yelled while taking out my sword. I smiled evilly and charged towards them.
Chapter Two – The Fun Battle
I jumped into the air and stabbed one in the chest.

I slapped another in the face, then got my blade out and slashed him.
“Heh… this is getting fun!” I shouted while punching a guard in the stomach and bit him. Now it’s the last guard… He looks tough though… I said to myself.
I dashed into the air and my wings grew, but it was too late, he already grabbed me by the feet. He pulled me down, but then somebody stabbed him already. The guard fell to the ground taking me with him.

Sorriez it's so short. ;D

I'm working on Chapter Four, and I'll post the other chapters later.


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PostSubject: Re: ~Life or Death~   ~Life or Death~ EmptySat Apr 24, 2010 11:49 pm

Suspensful! Love it!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Life or Death~   ~Life or Death~ EmptySun Apr 25, 2010 6:11 am

Do you mind if I make the small text a little bigger? I almost had to run down and get my glasses. xD

Anyways nice story! Maybe a bit longer? But since your posting chapters at the speed of light I think its okay to be short.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Life or Death~   ~Life or Death~ EmptySun Apr 25, 2010 11:36 am

Lol, sure Sairy.

And thankerz Cecily!
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